[Open-graphics] LinuxTag - Project Registration

[Dieter]

> > The Open Graphics Project (OGP) is developing a state of the art
> > desktop grapics card that has not only free drivers but also

"graphics"

> > completely open hardware. It wants to solve the problem of improper
> > support of graphics cards on the Linux/BSD desktop by building a card
> > from scratch instead of hoping that manufacturers will release
> > specifications.
> 
> I'd go with "imperfect" instead of "improper". While I do consider=20
> binary drivers improper, to most people the practical aspects are more=20
> important.

I suggest "insufficient" or perhaps "inadequate".

Perhaps change "It wants to solve" to "OGP wants to solve".

Perhaps change "hoping that manufacturers will release specifications"
to "hoping that manufacturers will some day release adequate specifications"
or perhaps "sufficient specifications".